A song I made

Here's the link to it:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L05DQWHM3TE&feature=channel_page

its listed as The Passing but I think I might switch our name to Genwye (short for Generation Y with different spelling too)

Awesome. Nice song. Would sound cooler with vocals and drums though

Constructive crticism: Move around and be more crazy. Song was good but there wasn't much energy. I don't know if you plan on being in a band but if you are this should help you. If not don't take it as me being a bitch.

Maybe you didn't see where we were? We were in my room and there wasn't much room to jump around considering there are 4 guitars in there (two off screen) and both of us holding are guitars...If we had more room we would be moving around more. We just need a freakin drummer and singer, and those are hard to come by (as are bassists but I am one)

I figured thats why you were not moving around.